Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think it should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
In regard of these adverse effects plastic wastes have caused on the environment, there are those who hold the belief that plastic shopping bags should not be allowed in our daily lives. From my perspective, I totally advocate this solution in order to save the alarming status of global environment and existence of natural creatures from becoming destroyed.
First and foremost, it is obvious that plastic bags is a considerable threat to the natural environment. As you know, plastic is a non-biodegradable substance, which means that it takes several thousand years just to decompose a simple plastic shopping bags. Therefore, when being deeply buried into the soil, the sustainable condition of these harmful bags will prevent flora's root from growing. As a result, it cannot be denied that both soil pollution and evenly erosion are certainly unavoidable.
Besides, plastic wastes are considered to be a potential criminal causing a huge death of varied animals. In clarification, it can be seen that fauna has supposed these plastic bags to be their food without having any awareness of their terrible injury. For instance, aquatic species have been cheated by jellyfish-like appearances of plastic bags and ingest them. As a consequence, this results in dreadful diseases to the marine life.
In conclusion, it in undeniable that plastic bags have badly affected on not only the environmental aspect but also the global animal lives. Hence, I myself strongly agree with the statement that the government should prohibit the usage of plastic bags as soon as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29365079365 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90573754107 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3342198456 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245096862235 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845997632314 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508048179439 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14647904501 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020095983849 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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