Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care about them.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Although, it is sometimes believed that presenting gifts to the closer ones reflect about the importance of that person for the presenter, while some are of the view that better options are available to please dearer ones. In my opinion, I consider that more could be done in different ways to appraise about love and care for beloved ones.
On the one hand, there are plethora options available to show love and care about someone. First of all, maximum time should be devoted to family and friends, and having long conversation with them would develop a sense of love bonding in their minds. Another significant way is to help them when they need. In other words, people remember only those who help them in their difficult times, so, this matters more to give a shoulder to the friends in their hard times and solving their problems.
On the other hand, gifts are the token of love, and it is also one of the way to show gratitude towards beloved ones. Gifts could be presented on some special occasions such as birthdays, marriage ceremony and any other joyful event. Exchange of gifts show that moments of enjoyment and happiness are equally important for both sides. It strengthens the bonds of love and relationship for longer time. Apart from this, gifts are remembered for life time, and these are priceless.
In conclusion, it can not be denied that gifts play a major role in strengthening the mutual relationships, however, devoting maximum time and helping their loving ones in their hard times would be remembered for long-lasting time, and this shows that how we truly care about them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...art from this, gifts are remembered for life time, and these are priceless. In conclus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, then, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85454545455 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48498565771 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0881880392 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30077757792 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104573662555 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519867495972 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177338815252 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241723420698 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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