TPO 20 Independent
It's obvious that going through the classic methods (which they can be effective in many ways) for reaching goals have a guarantee to not be concern about many aspects of doing works. But when we think about the big achievments, it seems the ordinary ways aren't much helpful. Reaching high quality needs new ideas, inventions and passionate for them.
By observing many successful companies, it is clear that none of them does the old same works which other companies do them.
Being a unique person is a requirment for persuing big dreams. If someone wants to reach high levels in his/her life, it's neccessary to follow the new ideas.
Taking risks is another important factor as well. if you are looking for big success, then making big decissions is needed. Looking back through the way big successful men and woman were go, it has a very simple answer: Big success isn't at the place where no innovation take apart.
Enthusiasm for reaching success will made us to taking big steps in our path. If we want the bank, We have to go through that way and take any risks for achieving that.
Persons that afraid of working on new ideas and wanting to continue on the way they know best, Can't have prospectives on having a high level on their lives. Unfortunately, this isn't work on being a super hero!
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-06-16 | Mahimoon | 70 | view |
| 2020-09-21 | Morteza1990 | 65 | view |
| 2020-06-29 | Hamide | 75 | view |
| 2020-03-16 | Seyed Armin Mirhosseini | 85 | view |
| 2019-08-03 | Farnood | 3 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...achievments, it seems the ordinary ways arent much helpful. Reaching high quality nee...
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Line 4, column 50, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ks is another important factor as well. if you are looking for big success, then m...
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Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...e way big successful men and woman were go, it has a very simple answer: Big succe...
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Line 4, column 232, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...t has a very simple answer: Big success isnt at the place where no innovation take a...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
.... Enthusiasm for reaching success will made us to taking big steps in our path. If ...
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Line 6, column 96, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
... to continue on the way they know best, Cant have prospectives on having a high leve...
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Line 6, column 177, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...vel on their lives. Unfortunately, this isnt work on being a super hero!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 230.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66086956522 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40681138039 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647826086957 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 618.680645161 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9756747005 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4615384615 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.