Today More and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara
desert or the antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays, people like to visit the places where they can find more attractions and activities to do. Some of the places like sahara desert or antartic does not have suitable weather though public attract towards that locations. Unconvenient places have many merits as well as demerits. Both are discussed further.
To begin with, youngsters like to visti the sites which have more adventure. Trend to visit the location which are adventuries and explorabale increasing very fast in todays time. People want to take the real experience of the place where the environment are diffrent from comman weather. Moreover, some states have main source of income purely depended on the tourists. Because there are no other sources available of income due to improper weather condition.
Tour of the places, where survive is very harsh have many disadvantages. The very first is, weather are varies based on various location and all the people are not comfortable with the environment. As a result sometimes they have to face the health issue on the tour. The basic facilities are not easly availbale in all the tourist places. In some visiting area, it becomes so difficult to comfort with the basic transportation services and stay availibility.
In conclution, tour of the danger areas give new experience and thrill, but the only pople who are comfortable and strong to adjust with any condition should visit that pleace else it happen they tourist have to face the issue which ruins the excitment of the tour, also waste of money and time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... more attractions and activities to do. Some of the places like sahara desert or antartic d...
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Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...income purely depended on the tourists. Because there are no other sources available of...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e not comfortable with the environment. As a result sometimes they have to face th...
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Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
...dition should visit that pleace else it happen they tourist have to face the issue whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05905511811 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62093861787 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.0292646477 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190245515884 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574965676187 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559743626576 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112534593579 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348292472705 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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