In many countries very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on t v ?
The importance of countries very few young people read new papers or follow the news on t v which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion . the substantial influence of this of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years .in my opinion the former latter proposition appears to be more rational . this essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion .
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that young man read in the newspaper as know ledge need less to say all these merits stand in a good bad stead
Elaborating my viewpoint there are some more merits demerits but one of the crucial effects is that young newspaper read in free time hence it is apparent why many are against in favour of this trend
According to the arguments aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits drawbacks of young people read news paper are indeed too great dire to ignore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8275862069 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57100137542 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635467980296 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.5024630542 244% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.070763493 50.4703680194 367% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.0 104.977214359 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.75 20.9669160288 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.33497536946 337% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300730492188 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16295909257 0.0925447433944 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178487549317 0.071462118173 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159641768421 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425269045674 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 12.6369458128 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.19 53.1260098522 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.9458128079 197% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.3980295567 212% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.5123152709 209% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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