Some people think that students who don't take a break in studies between highschool or universities is disadvantages.compare to who travels and work after highschools.do you agree or disagree.
In some developed countries,many people have believe that the pupils do not have break during studies because it create had effect on their grades. However,other think it has advantageous for students.so they can experience practical skill.Hence,I partially agree with the given statement.
There are several benefits are the after higher secondary education break a before tertiary education.In addition, students get a opportunity to have decided the own interests fields choosen.after the some work experience.Thus, Sabbatical year is a product key of progressive thinking. Moreover, pupils get a chance to learn a new skills and numerous good qualities.Like as disciplines, manners, punctuality and financial management.example many students has work in part-time job because of earning money and this money can be used for the university's fees. Furthermore, travel broadens the mind of students and this might be helpful them to gain valuable experience.many students who travels in different countries to acquire knowledge for culture, tradition and new language. Besides young people has would be mature enough to choose the path they would be like.
However, there are many drawbacks as well as, some students may not return to pursue their studies.examples,a person in job may find it enough for him to continue in their work. In addition,a youngster students are attracted to money. So they can get mislead in some other way.
In conclusion, youngster students should work or travel for a year after highschool to able them to decide their future.as well as some this may be failure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44758064516 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25292782153 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.39294679 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.1 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208473976541 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761908147932 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409077024489 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125445334728 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027116447042 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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