Is it better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with thier parents?
Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals college students to live far away from home than live at home has been one of the most prominent topics on the contemporary discussion. In my point of view both places are better to live for children and I will discuss merits and demerits for this notion in further elaborating paragraphs.
To commence with, living at home is better for students because family provide healthy diet as well as timely food are given to pupils. Moreover, family has support their children at matter of money and other difficult situation. Furthermore, students can do better studies at home because it provide good concentration during study time, but some disadvantage of living at home in which children nothing can grow in comfort zone.
On the other hand, live at far away from home also beneficial for pupils because they can widen their friend zone and they get independent which can develop decision making ability. Moreover, they know about hardworking as well as they can earn money with their own efforts. In addition to it, home sickness one of the most big problem has face by children which are live away from their home.
In conclusion, both living places are better for children development but some problem have face during living at places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...an do better studies at home because it provide good concentration during study time, b...
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Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...ldren development but some problem have face during living at places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9188034188 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52329710317 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568376068376 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2283925898 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.1 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.509180780804 0.242375264174 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206744416078 0.0925447433944 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134097332221 0.071462118173 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31746246312 0.151781067708 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818339942181 0.0609392437508 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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