The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
The author of the topic states an assertion that the well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority. While some may argue that this statement holds all the time, others may counter that claim by providing examples. In my essay, I will highlight both sides of the argument, and also provide sound reasoning for my claims.
The society is divided into two major part one is the government who has the authority to run the country and the other one is the citizen of the country. The government makes various policies, rules, schemes, for society and if something is being done for the society then why can't we question them, regarding their policies and any other step taken for the society.
The society will be benefited largely if they ask questions to the government or the authorities. According to my point of view, it will be a good practice to ask questions to authorities as this thing will make the crystal clear picture of the government's intentions for society. The will afraid to make any decision they will not be in favour of their country and this also leads to a better understanding between the government and society.
In some countries, people have a right to choose their government like India, USA, Canada, where the society can easily ask question to the government and can also comply to revoke the decision but the problem is in the country like Saudi Arabia, Qatar where the King rules the country or having a one-party system like in North Korea, where the people have no right to speak against their government and if they ask the repercussion could be very severe. So, what the people of these should do n order to ask their government, should be answered.
In nutshell, we can say that society should ask questions to the government as and when required and non-democratic countries mentioned above should give freedom to their citizen regarding their rights.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'one' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'ones'.
Suggestion: ones
... society is divided into two major part one is the government who has the authority...
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Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... is being done for the society then why cant we question them, regarding their polic...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y other step taken for the society. The society will be benefited largely if th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the decision but the problem is in the country like Saudi Arabia, Qatar where t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ernment and if they ask the repercussion could be very severe. So, what the peopl...
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Line 7, column 506, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'asking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: asking
...t the people of these should do n order to ask their government, should be answered. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83685800604 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58930893662 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510574018127 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.1578253512 60.3974514979 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.545454545 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0909090909 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283691329392 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130878120677 0.0831039109588 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189755411906 0.0758088955206 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155853735094 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898303237422 0.0667264976115 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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