In some cities government have few controls on deigns of houses and office. Owners should have freedom to choose designs. Do its advantages outweigh disadvantages .
It is a fact that in some urban areas few
controls are imposed on the choice of constructing residential buildings, office designs. Owners have freedom to choose styles of their homes and other buildings. According to my perception it has both benefits and drawbacks.
On the one hand, this phenomenon has many benefits. Firstly, now a days people want different and eyecatching designs of designs of their houses and offices therefore ,they build houses with latest designs and materials. To elaborate it, people use designing windows, doors, curtains etcetera to meet their dreams. Secondly, different buildings lead to variety in the country and make it worth seeing for outsiders as if everyone has unique design idea of construing home or office then it would add to the beauty of the country. Moreover, magnificent and sky scrapper buildings also indicate progress of the nation .finally, people know their own needs and requirements so they should have freedom to choose design of houses as well as they can conatruct homes as per their budget.
On the other hand, despite the benefits there are many drawbacks of this trend. First of all, in some metropolitan areas higher authorities control the designs of houses and offices by taking into account not only safely but also convenience of people which brings prosperity in the nation. Besides this, in order to make a county strong there should be more and more public facilities such as roads, bands, parks etcetera. Additionally, allowing people to choose house designs would neither safe nor convenient as people may use poor material for buildings. However, government focus on safely by constructing houses with strong materials. To exemplify,in some nations natural disasters like earthquakes and tsunami are frequent therefore, buildings should be construct in such a way that they can not cause damage to life on the earth.
To conclude, although allowing people to construct buildings as per their choice have some merits yet it has many demerits as mentioned before.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22188449848 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
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Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
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Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
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Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
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What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.061053240982 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600386849654 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113059031369 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034833632285 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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