A true university education encompasses far more than the narrow, specialized study of a single discipline. Only through exploring the broad spectrum of liberal arts courses can students become truly learned.
In 30 minutes, compose an essay on the quotation above. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the views expressed in the quotation. In doing so, be sure to explain the reasoning behind your taking this position. Consider to what degree the statement may or may not be true; take this into account in your discussion. You may not write on any other topic.
Education gives an individual the power to survive and thrive in a society.The issue mentioned here is quite complex and needs to be analysed in depth. While some feel that studying or learning a particular subject is what a true university education encompasses , many are of the opinion that pursuing a broader education is what it means to be truly learned. Despite the assertion that studying a specialized subject would be the paradigm for a proper university education , it is imperative that a broad range of topics are taught to the unversity students to make them pundits.On one hand there is the parochial study of subjects. On the other hand there is the in-depth analysis of the different liberal art courses that can help students in different stages of their lives. Iam of the opinion that covering broader topics in universities help students advance intellectually.
The chief reason for my view is that the students who enter into the universities are often confused on what subjects they should select for their study. This dilemma can be solved by allowing them to choose a broad range of subjects which helps them acquire additional skills which will help them advance later in their chosen careers.For example in India, the education system is such usually a broad range of subjects are given taught on in universities which allows the students to understand their topic of interest and also know additional information on other subjects.Finally Iam of the view that education needs have a myriad of subjects offered to the students so that they can have a nuanced view.
Another reason for my view on this topic is that the students can become proficient in multiple fields. This will surely make them stand out later on in life when they are choosing their particular careers. Lets take the example of the numerous universities that offre dual degrees like the degree which offers specialization both in Computer Science and Chemical Engineering. Though these subjects completely different from each other in my ways, it important to notice that a person who specializes in this degree will have oppurtunities uniquely open for him which was not the case if the they had pursued these degrees individually. The final result is that the universities need to wide range of subjects in order to help the students get unique oppurtunities
Although some might argue that a student would fare well in the specialized he or she has chosen because of their sole interest in that.Yet, taking some courses additional to that will only serve to help that individual to reach new heights.Finally educating the students on broader range of subjects is very imperative.
For all these reasons stated above, I therefore am of the opinion that when students are taught an eclectic set of subjects , it will help them do well later on in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 27.0 11.3162921348 239% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2384.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 476.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00840336134 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79855244394 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 754.2 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.374766738 60.3974514979 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.384615385 118.986275619 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6153846154 23.4991977007 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174506715551 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708270113101 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463357750585 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100861359325 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638852764591 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 14.1392134831 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.