The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.
The bar chart compares the rate of visitors going to cinemas in a European nation in the course of 3 years from 2003 to 2005.
Overall, while weekends were the best time for audiences to go to the movie theaters, Monday to Thursday witnessed a quiet time in this industry.
A glance at the bar chart provided reveals that Saturdays were the most popular time in Europe to attract most people to go to the movie with the fluctuation from 2003 to 2005, at 40%, 45%, and 43%, respectively. The runner-up position was Sundays, at 30% at the beginning of the time surveyed to 34% in 2005. Fridays were also the good time for most people to visit cinemas, however, we can see that the percentage of people going cinemas was the same during the time surveyed.
From Mondays to Thursday between 2003 to 2005, the propotion observed a significant variation, from 10% to 23%.
- The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four differentseasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures and make comparisons where relevant. 56
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- Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 84
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- Percentage of UK people who consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetable in 2002, 2006 and 2010. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... with the fluctuation from 2003 to 2005, at 40%, 45%, and 43%, respectively. The ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65806451613 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49649910963 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9144360531 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124266100718 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644320028614 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632409182995 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695725656655 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544846825328 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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