In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today women are sharing roles that were earlier associated with men of the house only. As more and more women join the workforce, it has become imperative for men to share household responsibilities with the lady of the house. I strongly agree with the above statement and this essay will further elucidate on the reasons; followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, with changing times the role of a woman has seen a significant transition as more and more women are coming out to work. These women who were earlier referred to as weaker sections are driving the household budget and income. But what makes their achievement more fascinating is there struggle to juggle between home and office. This constant pressure from both fronts i.e. home and office often takes a toll on their health, as the number of women who suffer from heart-related diseases and depression has increased manifold in recent years. Moreover, in developing countries around the world, these young girls are putting up a brave fight against stereotypes where the role of women is confined to the walls of the house.
Handling this social and family pressure requires support from within, and here is when men can extend a helping hand. When women have started to embark on their career path, its prudent for men to make their journey smooth and less stressful. Moreover, recent studies have proved that couples who share household responsibilities are less likely to get divorced. As in recent years, the number of family breakdowns has risen due to disputes related to sharing responsibilities. This new family setup requires both genders to be sensitive to each others needs. When men and women start sharing household chores, they set an example of an egalitarian society and epitomize this in front of their kids.
To conclude, men and women both should work for women empowerment and this requires support. Men should rise above gender stereotypes and help the lady of their house to keep the house in order. These small gestures not only provide emotional support but also cement the bond.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00576368876 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60784465733 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556195965418 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7601964605 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.176470588 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47058823529 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267298647424 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880364352717 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762824669486 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172167881231 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334441873562 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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