Some people think that prison sentences should not be used in dealing with criminals. Education and job training should be used instead.To what extent do you agree on disagree?

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Some people think that prison sentences should not be used in dealing with criminals. Education and job training should be used instead.
To what extent do you agree on disagree?

With my opinion about this, I think I agree to use education and job training criminals. I just agree about seventy percent about it because sometime we have many dangerous criminals. Many criminals now are fluctuation so we can capable use this method. All criminals can exposed the education or job while they are in prison. That method can be a wake up call for them, they will realize the truth and fix it. Everyone in this world can fix the fault which were we created. Whereas if we think prison sentences should be used in dealing with criminals, the criminals will have an instability and they didn’t realize their fault. With the second ideal, not only are make criminals dynamic, they are also become the new and completed citizens. They can help their cities or their local community. Example like in my country has one guy was stolen in house. When he already came out, he had been caught by the police and he must living in the prison about two years. In the prison he very upset and disappointed about himself. So he think he must restart himself. The police was detected him and give him an oppertunity to fixed. About two years, he was study hard in prison and now he is a goverment in my ward and have important role to develop the city. So I think I support the ideal is education and job training in the prison.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1037, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...t and disappointed about himself. So he think he must restart himself. The police was...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, whereas, while, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49794238683 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38544020766 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2696217353 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3125 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1875 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218709187822 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763237767578 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10181965546 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218709187822 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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