On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fotunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
Describe the item you lost
Explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regard to being supported from your insurance for my lost.
Unfortunately, In the last travel that I had to Canada, I have lost my cellphone which I recently had bought from apple store. it's specifics which I can describe it for you are a grey apple X with 256 capacity.
Since I was not accurate, I couldn't obtain the exact place where I've lost my phone. But the last moment I certainly know I had carried it , was at the theater named Manged.
According to the insurance chart which is published in your website, As my job includes many contacts per day. I prefer to receive whole price of it as fast as its possible till 4th July.
I would gratefully thank the company for their assurance of travel's lost.
Your faithfully
Poon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to ...
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...ted from your insurance for my lost. Unfortunately, In the last travel that I...
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Suggestion: Its
...I recently had bought from apple store. its specifics which I can describe it for y...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... a grey apple X with 256 capacity. Since I was not accurate, I couldnt obta...
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Suggestion: couldn't
...y. Since I was not accurate, I couldnt obtain the exact place where Ive lost m...
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Suggestion: I've
... I couldnt obtain the exact place where Ive lost my phone. But the last moment I ce...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...moment I certainly know I had carried it , was at the theater named Manged. ...
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...t , was at the theater named Manged. According to the insurance chart which i...
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...as fast as its possible till 4th July. I would gratefully thank the company for...
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...for their assurance of travels lost. Your faithfully Poon
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...f travels lost. Your faithfully Poon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 655.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 143.0 206.0 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58041958042 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50553977268 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699300699301 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0997243847 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7777777778 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211616301871 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755148168256 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468140798225 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103164328759 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483328233896 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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