Famous people sometimes give their opinions on public topics. Is this a good thing? To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In this contemporary settings, improvements in media has led to substantial rise in more number of renowned people of varied age. As well as a freedom to speech of anyone with justice or unbiased views there is no restrictions. Famous personalities take supreme advantage of their positions. Needless to say, no one has right to speak anti against anyone or demoralize a person against their cast, traditions or work. I agree partially towards specific personalities views about the public trending.
As far as I am concerned,if any prestigious personality speak about the hot topics on public. millennial will do the same things as per the words said by the them because famous people are the recognised faces nationwide. In spite of the fact, whether it is in their favour or not. Usually people follow them, aspire to live their lives as well imitate them to absorb their qualities. In other words, if a top-notch personality such as film actor make judgments on the current policy adopted by government. Whatever they will said whether it is in their favour or not. People will blindly follow them because they like them. Also, these high-profile personalities are made by people so they will prefer them and their wording only. Nowadays, actors and big profile business entrepreneurs and government officials put their statements via social media. Besides this, they tweet on Twitters, post objections on instagram as well as say abruptly in fine of media. Today's youth is ideal follower of this trend. They just follow and respect the views and opinions of these high notes personalities.
Secondly, following religiously to them and their words is valueless. Moreover, people would stand for their own point of view instead of these fake profit earning persons. Simultaneously, people want justice for the things governments always says to initialize this things for public welfare but they never do it.
On the other side of the spectrum, to some extent there are few people who make a huge conflict on just a normal tweet of any famous person. Most of these are elderly people who feel insecure and questionable for these recognised personalities opinions. As they live in richness with so, kind of facility so they can't imagine the normal life. As a result, some are in objections of this high profile faces views and opinions.
By hammering the nail into coffin, I pen down by saying that whatever these famous people will speak out in favour of media people will accept their viewpoint as they follow them. Whilst, there are some feel insecure towards the opinions of these faces with the notion of that they can't experience the ideal life so they don't have the right also to speak about them also when they gave no idea of this tensions, effects and sudden decisions because at the end this things will not affect them at any cause.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, in spite of, so to speak
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2370.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 480.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9375 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65400313468 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504166666667 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3299431861 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1538461538 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57692307692 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203076602245 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060577250052 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417303779699 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126441768031 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346524939184 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.