Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The issue of the proper time and place for children to learn about acting as a member of a whole team named society has been discussed by many, and although some say that kids should not be taught that until going to school, others, including myself, believe that it should start from earlier ages in family.
First, it should be noticed that still in some parts of the countries all around the world, there are children who are not sent to schools due to lack of adequate facilities and the need to work from childhood. These boys and girls are still living in the same environment others live, so they need to be trained being a decent citizen in their family.
Second, each family has its own experience and civilization knowledge gathered due centuries and should be transferred through generations, while in schools students of a class are trained all by one teacher.
Some people argue that children should learn how to contribute society from educational centers because family may cultivate acting with bias and loyalty to itself, as well as not to teach them working with members from their own age and positions. However, learning to be loyal to family might result in being faithful to society values in future. Also they may practicing what they learned from parents in future through coworking with other children in school.
In conclusion, I personally think that being trained to behave appropriately and responsively in social life is better to start from homes rather than schools, since there may be some kids cannot afford going to educational centers, and the exclusive collected wisdom each family gained about the ways and methods of living as a useful citizen.
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Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion: Also,
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to go'.
Suggestion: to go
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9298245614 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47715322268 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.139942266 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.625 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.625 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.625 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283427878374 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119153527742 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529098012022 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143840381337 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677757576465 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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