You borrowed some books from your school/college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library and explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.
Dear Mr.John,
I am writing to tell you about a problem and request your coöperation in this regard.
Actually, I recently borrowed two books of English literature from the library for one week. I am worried because I would not be able to return them on time. The reason is that I have to reach Lahore today as my grandmother who lives in Lahore has fallen down from staircase and got injured her ankle. My parents are out of country so I am the only family member who can look after her. Therefore, I am leaving for Lahore today to be with her in hospital.
Those books have handed over to my friend whose name is Maria. She is responsible of bringing them back to you within one or two days. I hope that you would complete rest of the process of receiving the books and I would not be charged a fine/penalty. I wish my grandmother could recover as soon as possible.
It will be a huge favor if you show your support and coöperation in this regard. I am looking forward to visiting you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Syed Ali.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: John
Dear Mr.John, I am writing to tell you about a prob...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40837696335 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54648404958 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623036649215 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5051895947 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7692307692 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21623880272 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740277072905 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509344323248 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138401413788 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296649025884 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.