The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear energy outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Atomic energy has been used for various purposes varying from making nuclear bombs, clean and cheaper energy and as a therapy for treating cancer patients. When used in the right manner, this energy would address many of the perennial burning issues that prevail in societies without causing much to the exchequer.
The world will forever remember the miseries of the people in Nagasaki and Hiroshima after the aftermath of dropping nuclear bombs during the second world war by the USA, where several millions of people had been killed and an equal number got seriously wounded. Nations, however, have not learnt lessons out of these gruesome incidents, but have taken precedence over other relevant issues to make nuclear bombs with a view to safeguard the nation from external threats. Ultimately, many countries today possess nuclear weapons thoroughly realising their dangers for the fear of being attacked. Consequently, the world peace is well-maintained, though skirmishes often occur between nations, because of the use of these weapons in a war would evoke pernicious consequences on the environment and its inhabitants.
At a time when the world is reeling under the threat of severe pollution, the authorities have a sigh of relief because of the availability of clean and cheaper nuclear power having no harmful effects to the environment. Moreover, the repositories of natural resources are being depleted considerably due to the excessive use of it. Besides. the health care departments make the best use of this energy for treating the cancer patients.
In conclusion, the benefits of nuclear energy are manifold and hence it is ascertained that its merits outweigh the demerits
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33085501859 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7746590318 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613382899628 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3756498789 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.4 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240278738793 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927680911318 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674511719874 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161199717627 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530573611461 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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