Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss
of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more
important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
<h4 style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px 0px 10px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; background-image: initial; background-position: 0px 0px; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; font-size: 18px; vertical-align: baseline; text-size-adjust: 100%; font-weight: 500; line-height: 1.3; font-family: "Open Sans", Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;">Many are of the opinion that the risks for endangered plants and wildlife are the most severe consequences of our worsening environment while others would argue that other problems are more pressing. While I consider the impact of recurring natural disasters to be important, in my opinion the loss of wildlife is the most serious threat to the environment.</h4><h4 style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px 0px 10px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; background-image: initial; background-position: 0px 0px; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; font-size: 18px; vertical-align: baseline; text-size-adjust: 100%; font-weight: 500; line-height: 1.3; font-family: "Open Sans", Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;">The rise in recent catastrophic natural disasters has been strongly linked to climate change. Many scientists have made the case that incremental rises in temperature, specifically involving the oceans, has increased the frequency and potency of hurricanes, tsunamis, and blizzards. There are countless instances of these from the last two decades but the tsunami affecting mainly Indonesia, Malaysia and Thailand in 2004 is a particularly striking example. This was the largest natural disaster this century and resulted in thousands of deaths, injuries and billions of dollars in damages, the effects of which set these developing nations back economically for years. People lost their lives, homes, and livelihood in many cases.</h4><h4 style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px 0px 10px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; background-image: initial; background-position: 0px 0px; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; font-size: 18px; vertical-align: baseline; text-size-adjust: 100%; font-weight: 500; line-height: 1.3; font-family: "Open Sans", Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;">The main reason that many people including myself are so focused on plant and animal life is because of the rising number of endangered animals in recent decades. One of the most well-known examples of this is the often cited case of polar bears. Polar bears live mainly in the Arctic and recent melting of the polar ice caps has resulted in reduced ice for polar bears to hunt on. Polar bears have become an endangered species and it is often forecast that by 2100 they will be entirely extinct in the wild. Their extinction will likely have a domino effect on the fragile ecosystems of the arctic and other endangered animals like seals and narwhales. This is just one example of the impact of global warming on animals and plants of our planet. Extinction is irreversible and there is no more lasting impression we can leave than to deplete the world entirely of a species.</h4><h4 style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px 0px 10px; border: 0px; outline: 0px; background-image: initial; background-position: 0px 0px; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; font-size: 18px; vertical-align: baseline; text-size-adjust: 100%; font-weight: 500; line-height: 1.3; font-family: "Open Sans", Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;">In my opinion, the loss of ecological diversity trumps any other environmental concerns. In order to remedy this problem governments and individuals need to take serious steps to not only invest more in conservation efforts for endangered animals but also work towards long term reforms related to fossil fuels, carbon emissions and the other apparent catalysts for climate change.</h4>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, in many cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3751.0 1615.20841683 232% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 557.0 315.596192385 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.73429084381 5.12529762239 131% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85807034144 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.49128520329 2.80592935109 160% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454219030521 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1029.6 506.74238477 203% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 259.145980199 49.4020404114 525% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 288.538461538 106.682146367 270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.8461538462 20.7667163134 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0479860762496 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0271449754243 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0195526450364 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0479860762496 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.7 13.0946893788 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.93 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 22.64 12.4159519038 182% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 78.4519038076 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 32.0 10.7795591182 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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