Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different
cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
No one can deny the effects that music has on people. It is the language of soul and it helps people to relax and forget about their problems. No matter the age or the background, music bring us all together. I totally agree with this point.
We have experienced music at the early stages of our lives. Moms use music to help their babies sleep or to stop crying. As they grow, at the daycare, teachers play music at the class to help them focus and be more active. It can be seen at the music classes at schools, how active pupils are. I remember, at my graduation party, students from different ages, they gathered together to sing and dance, even their parents were singing with them. Music is understood by all people from different ages, it helps to bring them closer.
At travel, language will be the main barrier to communicate with people or to make friends. However, Music concert is the best place where you can meet people from different cultures. A recent study made by Harvard university shows that 37% of expatriates meet their soul mates at clubs and concerts. People who listen to music they tend to be more friendly with others. No wonder music is prevalent in all festivals since it is the language that can be understood by everyone.
In summary, music has a positive impact on the listeners and it helps to relief ourselves. Personally, I believe it is the best way to bring different people together and to fade our disputes out. It is predicted that music will be always integrated part of our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will always be
...isputes out. It is predicted that music will be always integrated part of our lives.
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... out. It is predicted that music will be always integrated part of our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61904761905 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40801191462 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3865496039 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.0555555556 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209344949968 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768717406619 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569221485141 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148273657366 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508263923619 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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