The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear energy outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nuclear energy has increasingly become a tremendous alternative source of energy, for it gives very many options such as making atomic bombs, economically feasible and clean energy and a remedy for some of the dangerous diseases. Though the energy is not without its inherent potential risk; however, it generates umpteen opportunities if it is used judiciously.
The monopoly of fossil fuels, it enjoyed in the yesteryears, seemed to have plunged because of the ever-increasing ongoing demand of atomic energy. The former emits noxious gases which doubtlessly destroyed the pristine ambience of the incredible environment, besides its rising cost; whereas, the latter seems to have maintained a robust camaraderie with the ecosystem. Besides, many countries, regardless of their wealth, tend to make nuclear bombs making it as a bulwark to protect them if there is an insurgency or threat from outside. The vulnerable disease, further, called cancer has no longer been a nightmare amid people since the day medical science began to use the energy for medication.
Even though the meritorious impacts this energy brings, its meritless aspects cannot be overlooked on flimsy ground. The world had witnessed the colossal power of the atom bomb, dropped by the USA, which ultimately decimated tens of thousands of people in Nagasaki and Hiroshima, in addition to devastating the fertility of the soil. Moreover, the radiation discharged by the Fukushima nuclear reactor in Japan due to a terrible Tsunami, leaving people with irreparable health problems.
Overall, though nuclear energy poses a threat to humankind, it provides manifold benefits and if the government uses it judiciously, all its disadvantages can be redressed rationally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, moreover, so, whereas, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51492537313 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99300253205 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667910447761 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.0815317914 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.8 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19292343742 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651792224732 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538000686712 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119978002224 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385834386124 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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