We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own.
In asserting that we can learn more from people who share our views than people who oppose our views, the author dismisses the benefits and importance of disagreement and debate. However, this is not to deny that we can also learn from common views. In reality, whether we can learn more from common or opposing views is contingent on a lot of factors. And in general, I’m inclined to side with the latter – debate fosters progress.
It is true that people can learn from common views, especially the ones with fine distinctions. Imagine a political party in which the members share the same broad views of how to better the society yet differ a little in the exact approaches. Through discussion, they can complement each other and come up with a more thoughtful plan easily. But being swamped with common views can also be dangerous in two aspects. First, without contrasting opinions, people tend to overlook the defects in their views and gradually become complacent due to lack of doubts. Moreover, people won’t question whether their ideas are fundamentally right or wrong since there’s no one challenging them. To make it worse, these two potential threats often go hand in hand, which can be exemplified by the Nazi Germany and other authoritarian countries. Therefore, though people can learn from common views, the threats should not be discounted.
On the other hand, debating with people who have opposing views, though gruelling sometimes, is a precious opportunity to gain a more profound understanding of the topic in debate. Now imagine we are discussing with an opposite party in terms of solving a particular problem. In defending our own views, we have to glean enough supporting evidence and look for potential loopholes that may be spotted and attacked, thereby reinforcing the persuasiveness of our argument. In rebutting the opposite, we are forced to listen carefully to a different approach to identify the flaws in their argument, which may turn out to be a much better solution. Whatever the results are, win or lose or tie, both parties will understand the topic better by realizing two facts – the solutions they have are not perfect and there are alternative approaches – and thus precluding the two potential threats mentioned above.
More importantly, progress forms during the debate. By discussing rigorously over different ideas, the one of real value prevails. The process may be time-consuming and stressful but the benefit it brings will manifest itself in the long term in almost all fields. In reality, to lay the foundation for debate, many countries deliberately introduce two-party or multi-party systems. For another example, any progress in the academic world is basically built on debates among disparate hypotheses.
Yet there are some scenarios where people actually can’t learn from contrasting views. For one, discussion between people who have irreconcilable beliefs, for example, atheists and Christians, is pointless. For another, people who are obstinate about their own opinions are unwilling to accept opposing views, no matter how compelling they are. On the contrary, people who are susceptible to others’ opinions are only too willing to give up their grounds even if they are right. But all of these are rare cases and thus cannot undermine the importance of leaving room for contrasting views.
All things considered, I hold the opinion that people can learn more from opposing views instead of common views because conformity may lead to complacency and even wrongdoing while debate, though gruelling or futile sometimes, is indispensable in the development of our society.
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 83
- It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero. 66
- We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own. 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 788, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in general, it is true, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3095.0 2235.4752809 138% => OK
No of words: 589.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25466893039 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92639038232 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85655453996 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 306.0 215.323595506 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519524617997 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 945.9 704.065955056 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5726416786 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.535714286 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0357142857 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338275166543 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093978419473 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10394315719 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193844968283 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136186292879 0.0667264976115 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 100.480337079 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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