Some people say that the best way to discourage smoking is to make smoking illegal
in public places. Other people say that this is not enough and that other measures are
needed.
Discuss both these views1 and give your opinion.
Smoking is a serious public health problem, and it needs to be discouraged. Some people feel that making laws against smoking in public places is a good way to do this. Others believe that more needs to be done. In my opinion, laws against smoking are an important part of discouraging this bad habit, but I agree that more needs to be done.
Laws against smoking in public can go a long way toward discouraging this dangerous habit. If people aren't allowed to smoke in public, that means they can't smoke in restaurants, stores, parks, offices, banks, libraries, and other places. It means that whenever they are not in their own homes or their friends' homes, they can't smoke. This makes it difficult to smoke much of the time, and it makes people think twice before they light a cigarette.
However, I don't feel that such laws are enough. They still allow people to smoke some of the time. I believe that education is also important. This could take several forms. For example, schools could have special programs to teach students about the dangers of smoking. In addition, there could be notices on TV, the radio, and the Internet that give information about the negative effects
of smoking. The more information people see about the dangers of smoking, the more they will become aware of it. Then, they will be less likely to choose to smoke, even in their own homes.
Smoking is a serious problem, and we need to do something about it. I believe that laws against smoking in combination with education can do a lot to prevent people from starting or continuing this dangerous habit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...raging this dangerous habit. If people arent allowed to smoke in public, that means ...
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'smoking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: smoking
...angerous habit. If people arent allowed to smoke in public, that means they cant smoke ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ed to smoke in public, that means they cant smoke in restaurants, stores, parks, of...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Homes
... in their own homes or their friends homes, they cant smoke. This makes it difficu...
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n homes or their friends homes, they cant smoke. This makes it difficult to smoke...
^^^^
Line 13, column 12, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ore they light a cigarette. However, I dont feel that such laws are enough. They st...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ough. They still allow people to smoke some of the time. I believe that education is also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, then, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85971223022 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39620460121 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517985611511 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9998285318 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0555555556 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291445839621 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987274819431 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805658350078 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891741765893 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677113979626 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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