Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
Doctors’ survey depicts that a pregnant women drastically move into psychological effect along with endure plenty of pain at the time of birthing child that actually is quite difficult. I, however, believe that husband and wife both are responsible to bringing up the children not only women that actually is foremost requirement for infants.
This paragraph will discuss about the advantages of brought up children through equal gender instead of blaming on women which can create number of adverse consequences in their life. Firstly, a man always plays a vital role among the family who can sacrifice every kind of obstacles for family. In addition, many intellectual people are concerned that it's very painful for women to look after each and every thing about the kid at the time of birth for instance, changing diapers at midnight, feed the children as on required and many others that is why husband must entice to his wife even support in her duties.
On the other hand, some people believes that from birthing to brought up the children is the responsibility of a women not a man which is totally wrong perception that creates distance between man and women, as well as, it has number of adverse consequences which could be ruin children life as well. Furthermore, many a time I have noticed that mostly man does not give proper time owing to lack indulgence as well as not try to own the responsibility of kid which can be the reason of devastation.
To sum up, fatherhood should contribute evenly in order to bring up their kids in well-being. Moreover, it is the responsibility of every man to stimulate their wife at every stage especially in critical situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...the children is the responsibility of a women not a man which is totally wrong percep...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stage especially in critical situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, kind of, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93684210526 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79121869726 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.6221758983 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.333333333 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.6666666667 7.06120827912 250% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206584684505 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902301148035 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579392451843 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127494313474 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163623586765 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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