Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:“Movies and television strongly influence the way people behave?” Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rson has his own thoughts that influence his life and the way he behaves. Movies ...
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... spent time. I agree with this statement because in movies we can see a different...
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...at influence us like a person and it is a important platform for humanity where w...
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...I will explore in the following essay. Firstly, humans are sociable organism an...
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...s and television express different ideas ,information and situation that help us t...
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...o correct or incorrect. For example, two years ago I didnt have friends because I...
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...correct. For example, two years ago I didnt have friends because I was very unfrien...
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...iends because I was very unfriendly and didnt speak with nobody, but in one day I wat...
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...mpact and what emotions have friends on persons life.I understood that my behavior is i...
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...t emotions have friends on persons life.I understood that my behavior is incorrec...
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...erent movies and to improve your life. Secondly, scientists prove that movies a...
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...ccupy 65% of our life. This medias have a important impact because everyone can u...
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...ecause everyone can use them everywhere.On television we can watch news,shows,movi...
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...erywhere.On television we can watch news,shows,movies and each of them conveys differe...
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...information that change us. For instance,one year ago I started to wathced the news ...
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.... I was shocked to find about this news.As a result I understand that television a...
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...owledge about the world ehere we live. In conclusion I am of the opinion that m...
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...d television influence the way we behave .This is because they are everywhere in ...
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...television influence the way we behave .This is because they are everywhere in our ...
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...ave .This is because they are everywhere in our world and they expres new ideas f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as for, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66857142857 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66193730281 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502857142857 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9544244721 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.933333333 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174858656746 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641879332327 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391888318595 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11537900326 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04762422477 0.0645574589148 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.