Parents want to achieve balance between family and career but only a few manage to achieve it. What do you think is the reason? Discuss possible solutions and provide examples.
To achieve a balance between family and career is a desire of most of the parents, but remains unrealistic for many. A strong compulsion to earn money to sustain in the society is the main reason for failing to achieve the balance. This particular problem can be avoided by finding ways to save money and allocating appropriate time to both the family and for the career.
Parents being pushed into ever running money-earning life have an imbalance between their family life and career. While the inflation is pinned down for the necessity to earn more money, a disproportionate expenditure of time at work and home also adds insult to the inury. For example, when both the parent of the family work three jobs a month to make the ends meet, more the number of hours they spend away from personal life and lesser the time to plan for their children. Consequently, an imbalance often leading to progression in the career at the cost of ignorance towards the family.
However, cutting down unnecessary expenses may allow parents to work less, which in turn provide some extra time to spend with family members. Careful expenditure of salary or wages with little savings spares the breadwinner of the family relief from extra jobs. This decompresses the mind and gives a relaxed situation for quality family time. For instance, money spent on entertainments can be cut down to half and diverted to the medical or food expenses; thereby, reducing the need to work extra hours.
To conclude, most of the parents find it difficult to attain a balance between family and career. Inevitable need to earn money due to inflation made them excel in career but fail in the family although proper planning to save money and time may root out this cause in several ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85430463576 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57655047332 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543046357616 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.43756878 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159064158532 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070957359454 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664845011319 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110692916945 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488606452961 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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