There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phone. Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phone.
Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals problems associated with usage of mobile phone has been one of the most prominent topics on the contemporary discussion. People have been always been intrigued to analyze and explain use of mobile phones create social, medical problems. In my opinion mobiles phones have number of benefits but it associated enormous drawbacks.
To begin with, there are plethora of benefits of using mobile phone because it makes the life easier and more comfortable. Firstly, People are using mobile phones for the purpose of communication with each others at any time. Moreover, it is source of education as well as entertainment because which consist of knowledge as study and different games for spend free time with it.
On the other hand, there are enormous problems are spread by using mobile. Primarily, majority of people are indulge in cell phones in all time so it reflect bad impact on their health. Mobile phones reflect harmful radiations which are dangerous for human health. Secondarily, it creates the social and technical problems because masses have misuse of mobile phone it create conflict into society. Furthermore, scaring cell phone in continues which impact on the eyes. For example, the high authorities had surveyed that many children have lost their eye light due to more usage of mobile in more hours.
In conclusion, usage of mobile phones provide benefits of people but it spread enormous harmful problem in human life so it the responsibility of individual which way use of mobile.
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| 2019-08-23 | khehra mandeep | 72 | view |
| 2019-08-23 | Vanshdeep singh | 55 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have always been
... on the contemporary discussion. People have been always been intrigued to analyze and explain u...
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Message: Did you mean 'reflects'?
Suggestion: reflects
...ndulge in cell phones in all time so it reflect bad impact on their health. Mobile phon...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...e masses have misuse of mobile phone it create conflict into society. Furthermore, sca...
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Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of individual which way use of mobile.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13059701493 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64876756102 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537313432836 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2784326799 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2142857143 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.25397266985 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424820890383 0.242375264174 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157795834832 0.0925447433944 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942135403804 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272786193648 0.151781067708 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429677433143 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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