Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed. However, some people think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people argued that animals living in zoos are vicious and should discontinue, some people thought that it can help to preserve the endangered species. Wild animals are protecting zoos for their habitat and propagation, that rarely seen in new generation that people should preserve. People thinking to end the zoos, are those believe it can put to jeopardy to the people due to animals behavior.
Dangerous animals that usually seen in wildlife, most of species now being protected in zoo. Owing to environmental problem that most are facing, endangered animal loss their habitat, as a result, species don't have food to eat, become sick and the worse scenario they are dying. To preserve the wild animals, sectors keep them in the zoo to take care of them. People can visit and enjoy animals living in the zoos that mostly only seen in the forest and mountain. Additionally, it also help the people if they want to research that particular animals for education purpose. Moreover, the young population can still find and see it personally that they can only see in television, books and internet.
On the other hand, some people thought that zoos should be closed, not allowing people to visit,because it can risky for them. Because of animal vulnerable,distinct and unexpected behavior they might cause injury to the visitors.
In my conclusion, protecting wild animals in the zoos can help animals to preserve and breed new one, that young generation can benefit. Proper maintenance and protection of the zoo should be strictly implemented,so people can be safe to visit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the species') or simply say ''most species''.
Suggestion: most of the species; most species
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Suggestion: helps
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Suggestion: , because
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Suggestion: , so
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, still, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09195402299 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76514766377 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513409961686 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7654727689 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297510806975 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126412170039 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997288908988 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215792306246 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07420323407 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.