Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The society is now facing the effects of global warming brought about by modernization which mainly affects the environment. Some are of the view that common people do not have the influence to act upon this issue and that it should be the government and large industries who can intervene. As for me, I predominantly agree that with the help of these sectors, certain measures may effectively reduce this environmental problem.
It is true that change should come from the people as they are the first ones who are affected by the environmental change. Most of the problems arise because of human actions such as deforestation by farmers, improper waste management by the homeowners and fuel excess from transport vehicles. All of these can lead to the ongoing problem with pollution which can significantly increase the temperature of the world.
However, global awareness cannot be achieved without the intervention coming from the world leaders and business owners who are advocates in climate change. They can greatly influence the general public to initiate certain actions leading a positive outcome. Recently, the clean-up drive for the Pasig River of the Philippines which started ten years ago by both the local and non-government organization have been concluded. As a result, people were able to enjoy the true beauty of this area.
Furthermore, the government should institute policies and programs that supports environmental preservation. This does not only remedy the current problem within the surroundings in the community but also save the future generations from the long-term effects of global warming. As an effect to this, the citizens today are assured that their children can have a safe place to live in the future.
By and large, globalization has brought about drastic changes which affect the environment and individuals should start saving the world. However, I am of the opinion that the initiative by the government and private sectors make may bring about success in environmental preservation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...m the world leaders and business owners who are advocates in climate change. They can g...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... change. They can greatly influence the general public to initiate certain actions leading a p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, as for, such as, as a result, by and large, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32198142415 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93326294037 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582043343653 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.198029876 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.6 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160075620461 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506942246224 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454800906391 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087763718104 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356015066599 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.