Some people believe that to be successful at sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful.
Discuss both views and give your opinion ?
Although some individuals think that in order to succeed at a sport one needs to possess an inborn talent, others believe that working hard and regular practice towards a sport can make an individual successful. In my opinion, I think daily dedicated serious practise can help the desired sports person to thrive at a particular sports.
On the one hand, some human beings think that a person who is born with some natural skills for a particular game is bound to succeed. In other words, some individuals are born talented with certain skills, helping them to learn vivid techniques and play a game with ease; thereby, achieving success. For instance, Sania Nehwal, a well-known badminton star had a natural ability to play the forward stroke which helped her to become the youngest badminton player from India. Thus, having a natural ability towards a particular game can assist a person to become a successful sports' personality.
On the other hand, some people believe that working seriously towards a particular game and regular practice helps a person to succeed. They point to the fact that every person is born with the same opportunities and it is the individual's commitment and dedication towards the sport that helps one to become a star. Unlike a natural ability sports person who relies only on his inborn talent, a person with regular practises and sincere commitment learns and develops various unique skills and abilities which help him to succeed even in difficult situations. For example, Sachin Tendulkar, the world's top-notch cricketer who is known for his regular practise and commitment towards game and Vinod Kambli, a natural stroke player, entered in cricket together, but it was Sachin Tendulkar who was able to achieve heights in all formats of game because of his dedication towards hard work, and Vinod Kambli was only able to succeed in a particular format that too for a limited period. As a result, it can be said that regular commitment towards a game helps a person to master their skills; therefore, become successful.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think practising regularly and sincere dedication towards a game helps a sportsperson to possess various skills and learn different techniques which helps one to become an effective sports' person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... assist a person to become a successful sports personality. On the other hand,...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...th the same opportunities and it is the individuals commitment and dedication towards the s...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... which helps one to become an effective sports person.
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Suggestion:
...e to become an effective sports person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14736842105 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6637039174 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455263157895 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.2139823199 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.0 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217305930352 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105340122787 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757076003957 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163709169982 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928963563143 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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