You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Ms Gomes,
I am a student from Saint Andrews college and live in a college provided accommodation at Hart Foundation Youth Hostel on Belarus Street 5. I am writing this letter requesting for change of my room from twin sharing to a single room.
Presently, I am sharing my apartment with a 3rd year engineering student ms. Susan Silva. Unfortunately, from past 3 months, it has been very difficult for me to focus on my studies and project work. she is a very social person and has uninvited friends at the apartment every weekends to have parties till late night. she does not like doing her laundry regularly and hence, often borrows my clothes without my permission, which I dislike. I have an important entrance exam for enrolling for Masters’ Program as Kellogg’s University coming up in the month of November and need a quiet place to prepare. Therefore, I wish to move to single room.
Trust you will understand my current situation and would give me a suitable room at the earliest.
Yours sincerely,
Ray Mantis
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...o focus on my studies and project work. she is a very social person and has uninvit...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ekends to have parties till late night. she does not like doing her laundry regular...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours sincerely, Ray Mantis
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06179775281 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87502710174 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707865168539 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1933090929 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181593047839 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058672278099 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478073276927 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124162957755 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387616120288 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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