Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the advantage and disadvantage of tourist who visits such places?
In the first half of twenty century, more people want to visit unspoiled and unfavoured conditioned places despite their extreme weather conditions, for instance, the hot setting of the Sahara desert or an utterly cold place like Antartica. These places have merits and demerits for their tourists, I will discuss further in my essay.
Firstly, living in a harsh environment is challenging for some and excitement for many, people explore such places to get massive knowledge, for instance, climate change is a cause for environmental problems we are facing, like how quickly the glaciers are melting is the first-hand knowledge we are getting. Also, there is a plethora of beautiful places to illustrate, the location of flora or fauna.in addition people also want to know the culture of such places and how the people did struggle to survive in such worst conditions of climate.
On the other hand, despite the modern technology world we still cannot measure the climate conditions accurately. About 65 thousand years ago all species of dinosaurs and other animals were extinct because of climate change and, how was the human life if that species were still alive. However, the unpredictable weather condition is cause for tourists, such as the ratio of floods in India and japan predict before is still tricky. However, lack of life essentials such as water and food also has a cause for such places
To concur, although the visit of such places like the Sahara Desert or Antarctica is good enough for massive knowledge and abundant of One’s Horizon. On the contrary, visiting such places is quite challenging and dangerous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
In the first half of twenty century, more people want to visit unspoiled an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, for instance, in addition, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15298507463 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64647478804 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563432835821 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9943142772 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.444444444 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7777777778 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8888888889 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266714658874 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122854296844 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964085876322 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18389737112 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072753357449 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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