Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is impor

Essay topics:

Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them

There is belief that the allowing children to take their own decisions on matters such as food, clothes and entertainment may result in selfish individuals in the society whereas others think it’s their right to make decision on such matters. In my opinion, the children should be allowed to decide on the fundamental matters of their life but I also believe that children should attain minimum age before allowing them to take these decisions.

On one hand, children who are given more privileges in the early ages do become choosy and selfish in nature. Firstly, opportunities to choose necessities such as food may be detrimental to child health as they often prefer the fast foods which are high in carbohydrates and fats. Children having very less knowledge on health, always choose unhealthy food and when not given their demands may cause tantrums. Secondly, children selecting their own clothes tend to select more trendy, fashionable and costly clothes which may create financial problem for parents. Research also indicates that children who are given these types of facilities in early ages have high risk of acquiring selfishness, tantrums and bullying personalities.

On the hand, the children who are given opportunities in later ages become independent and creative in decision making abilities surpassing all the cons which are described in above paragraph. Secondly, youngsters who are still depending on the parents for these decisions tend to be shy and timid. Youth who have knowledge on the society and dealings of day to day life, may choose wisely. For instance, youngsters who are sensitive to the feelings of the parents and society, always take decisions using intelligence and wisdom. Presently, youth are taking decisions on food based on their studies.

In conclusion, the youth who have gained the knowledge, wisdom from the teachers, parents and society should always have the opportunity for deciding their life situations.

Votes
Average: 5.2 (2 votes)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2020-01-22 aghasaeed 73 view
2020-01-21 Noah1997 67 view
2020-01-21 Noah1997 67 view
2020-01-15 eslamyousry 73 view
2019-12-26 hungdung2507 61 view
>>> More users practiced this topic >>>
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 219, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ove paragraph. Secondly, youngsters who are still depending on the parents for these decisions tend...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34294871795 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74929762114 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516025641026 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5387104798 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.230769231 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272868384579 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963652392136 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097506251102 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174458717526 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125033099829 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.