friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .....................,
Dear Sarah,
Hope you are doing well!
Thank you so much for being kind enough to take care of my pet while I am going on vacations. Firstly, I would like to tell you about the eating preference of my cat. He eats Sushi and raw chicken only. Sometimes, he will give you hard time in eating food, please be patient with him as I have spoiled him so much. Usually, he sleeps two times in a day and eats immediately as soon as he wakes up. He loves to play with his teddy bear which I have given to you already.
Please do not forget to check mail box after every Tuesday as mail arrives between Wednesday to Friday.
You can contact me on +92-33-44-55 if you need any help. You can call me anytime.
Yours sincerely,
Jiah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sarah, Hope you are doing well! Thank you...
^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... call me anytime. Yours sincerely, Hina
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 612.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 139.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40287769784 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27781645505 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.73381294964 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9162565816 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165348340939 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676492533992 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607311939095 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736479002606 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343128128432 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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