In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A small number of people earn a remarkable pay in their job's in some countries. Some people believe that it is beneficial for a country while others reason differently than the government stabilise salaries by regulating amount earned. In my essay I will discuss both views and give my opinion.
Firstly, the highly paid individuals are to impact on the country's economy, and not only think of themselves. For example, the Royal family, are the most paid in England, but their wealth is not just within the family, but they have been able to create jobs and help petty traders develop their business.
Secondly, on the contrary, in some countries this days, the rich are getting richer and the poor are getting poorer. Hence, the reason why the government should look into the salary earned, and regularise the amount earned. A more practical way this can be done is by rationalizing it on responsibility basis. The married earn more than the singles. By these families will be more content and also single.
The government has a vital role to play in the salaries earned. A strategy can work in a country and for others. In my country Nigeria, the rich are adding to their wealth, while the poor suffers. If only a few earn increasingly high amount, most people will continue to live an average life while others struggle.
In conclusion, salaries earned need to be regularised in a way it favors the country. What works in London can not work in Nigeria. Hence, the government should work with the initiative that works for it's people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: A few; Some
A small number of people earn a remarkable pay in their j...
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Line 9, column 46, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...dly, on the contrary, in some countries this days, the rich are getting richer and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58796293464 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6611076523 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6470588235 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355295466895 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973137308739 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768387888571 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184974767083 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126511184101 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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