the table below shows information and prediction regarding the change in the percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The table illustrates the data about the propotion of people aged 65 and above in population of three different countries, including Canada, Germany and United Kingdom, in 1988 and 2000, with prediction of it until 2030.
Overall, the greatest percentage of population aged 65 and above is can be seen in Germany in all three years. This figure of UK showed the smallest rise from 1988 to 2000 while the share of older people of Canada and Germany increased both by around 5 per cent.
Between 1988 and 2000, there was an increase of approximately 5 per cent in the percentage of population aged 65 and above in Canada and Germany, while Britians aged 65 and above contributed to population only 14.23 and 14.89 per cent in 1988 and 2000 respectively, rising by less than 1 per cent. In those three years, the percentage of older people in Germany remains the greatest, always above 20 per cent, among three countries.
Regarding the forecast, in Canada, Germany and UK the share of population aged 65 and above will grow by around 5 per cent from 2000 to 2030, reaching 26.35, 30.42 and 20.35 per cent respectively.
- The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. 61
- the table below shows information and prediction regarding the change in the percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries. 67
- The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. 84
- Learning English at school is often seen as more inportant than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80512820513 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62328620365 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487179487179 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2780503513 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.166666667 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308241575324 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181585280489 0.103423049105 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861593268572 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211116769446 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561563540896 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.