How to control the rapidly growing population in the cities and the necessary measures to the taken to control it.
The importance of growing population which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. This essay will further elaborate my reason for the positive effects of this trend and this will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that growing population put bad impact on our society as well as many people has two children and three children which is not necessary. Consequently, Government should apply a note for every people use condom for sex with her partner. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that other parents have not planning for babies. Needless to say, all these merits stand growing population in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, this trend has some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that every people should use the condom for sex to control the growing population. Besides, people should aware for that and handed the growing population. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favors of growing population.
According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of growing population are indeed to great.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...growing population are indeed to great.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, hence, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11848341232 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64682502473 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554502369668 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8936727589 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112919325785 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510725602387 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376327712442 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752611651007 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258879053425 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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