Because of the global economy, many goods including. What we use daily produced by other countries hava to be transported for a long distance.To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The importance of global economy which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effect of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that we can taste so many foreign variety fruits and vegetable and many good produce and many establishment of different product brands like Adidas and Nike. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that global economy supply clothes and vehicles and these is very best quality. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfall that negate these argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one the most alarming one is that global economy many countries supply cheap quality product only to India. And variety price is very high and poor people not buying these product. Besides, countries supply cheap produces. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
According to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of global economy are instrument indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[4]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun produce seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much good produce', 'a good deal of good produce'.
Suggestion: much good produce; a good deal of good produce
...oreign variety fruits and vegetable and many good produce and many establishment of different pro...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun establishment seems to be countable; consider using: 'many establishments'.
Suggestion: many establishments
...and vegetable and many good produce and many establishment of different product brands like Adidas...
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Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'pitfalls'?
Suggestion: pitfalls
...a good stead. However, there are some pitfall that negate these argument and which ca...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this argument' or 'these arguments'?
Suggestion: this argument; these arguments
...ver, there are some pitfall that negate these argument and which can certainly overwhelm the p...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this product' or 'these products'?
Suggestion: this product; these products
...is very high and poor people not buying these product. Besides, countries supply cheap produc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25225225225 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53024878533 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.7218533757 50.4703680194 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103970006253 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039210558161 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276583653494 0.071462118173 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630277143204 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235179196829 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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