Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Working is a vital part in daily life. People need to work in order to maintain and improve their life, therefore improve the nation. There are so many different types of work, and one of them is self-employed. At the current time, it is a trend for self-employees to work at their own house, rather to work for a corporation. In my opinion, there are so many reasons for this cause, and it may bring some negative impacts.
The reasons for being self-employed are vastly, but one of them is the sake of convenience. A normal routine for employees working for a company is so exhausted. He or she might has to get up early, eats breakfast then drives furiously to work. Sometimes they might encounter traffic jams, therefore causing more problems. Being late at work means that the salary will be reduced, and sometimes the living expenses can not be covered for a full month. Furthermore, overtime works can prevent them from getting back home on time, hence reducing their own health. Doing jobs at home is the solution to counter all of the above problems. Getting up early is not required, and late for work is a non-exist problem. Due to the advantages it brings, it is not rare to see the increase of freelancers nowadays.
Beside the benefits as mentioned above, the disadvantages of self-employed are also uncountable. First, working at home eventually cut off the worker’s social interactions. Offices may be a tired and tension places, but they guarantee a level of contact with others. One example for this is you have a big struggle for seeking help if you work at home, because you don’t have any work mate. Another big con is companies have these types of workers can not really control and verify their own work. Workers at home might apply their work with help from others, or even steal someone’s work in an aggressive way. If these stolen intellectual properties got figured out, companies will suffer their biggest scandal, and free employees might just fly away without a trace.
In my conclusion, self-employees should be considered in a specific and detailed way. To employ a worker to work at home, a company must have specific agreements and requirements, so they can ensure no problems will be made.
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- Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree/disagree? 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
...refore improve the nation. There are so many different types of work, and one of them is self-...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reasons for this cause, and it may bring some negative impacts. The reasons ...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...jobs at home is the solution to counter all of the above problems. Getting up early is not...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an aggressive way" with adverb for "aggressive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hers, or even steal someone's work in an aggressive way. If these stolen intellectual propertie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82068355055 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550649350649 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.623417928 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.3043478261 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7391304348 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17391304348 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315813193721 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916877088382 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787812606892 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209511384874 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394870327816 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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