Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
as people regard traveling as an essential part of their lives more and more, which how traveling, in group or individual, become a controversial topic amonge prople. in this regard, some people hold the view that traveling in a group with a tour guide become more effective, while other people have opposite view. as far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I will try to examine my reasons as follows.
first, tour guide can become more effective than traveling as a single part. as a role, a competent tour guide can equip his/her passengers with insightful view over different subjects and rewarding experience to overcoming difficulties in the numerous situations in the long journay. in addition, experienced tour guide resembles a map, you will steer clear the obstacle on the your traveling. for example, in the musume, if someone can not figure out the spesefic issue in there, because there are a number of cultures, various history, representative arts, etc, can ask either other members of the group or the tour guide.
second, discriminating choices of tour guide can make a lot of difference. how? some tourists would like to vist a specific palce, whereas others would like to go another place. here, tour guide has vital role. small example may give some light to this point, once I go to visit the Lut desert, where placed in the middle of Iran, I would like to visit desets at night, while other persisted to stay at home, finally, tour guide could help me to visit the night sky in desert.
However, some people may vote such a plane to visit to traveling by individual not as a gourp. as many tourists confess, and according to my experience, there are numerous difficulties and trouble some situations that tourists have to deal with. hence, tour guide not only being in positin to taking initiative, but also can make a best decision and devlope the plan. so, we can achieve our goal with a tour guide in the our journay.
in conclusion, taking all into account, traveling with tour guid as a group has alot advantages. expericence, abilities to cope with difficulties and so forth are small advantages when someone travelling with a rout guide as a groupe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88918205805 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67596910148 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562005277045 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6562491341 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.944444444 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329431113592 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107846826065 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846326755986 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201949821614 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890307692247 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.