Whether a nation should host international events like Olympic Games and World Cup?
The important effect of a nation should host international events like Olympic Games and World cup which was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substantial influence of a nation should host the international events like game has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of these trend in recent year in international event. It can be agreed that a nation should host the international event like games which helps the country to develop the carrier in the game sector in the internationally and it is beneficial for the country.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why nation should host the international events but the most conspicuous one steam's from the fact that international events helps the people to upgrade their talent and makes the people popular in all over the world. As an illustration, a current study shows that two football player of Nepal got the gold medal in America for best player of the Olympic games in 2010. In addition, world cup and Olympic games helps the country to increase the financial status of the country. Thus, a country should host the International events like games and world cup.
Another key of justification for upholding the notion is that international events helps the player to upgrade their mental, physical, economical status and which makes the player popular in all over the world as well as in the society. For instance, international events helps to increase the interpersonal relationship with different country, different players, different events organizer etc. Thus, international events is very important for the country development.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of a country should host the international events is prominent and international events plays the vital role for development of good country so it is important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Line 9, column 375, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'events'' or 'event's'?
Suggestion: events'; event's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98449884124 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446666666667 0.580463131201 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0769479037 50.4703680194 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.181818182 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.556889429915 0.242375264174 230% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.273176661523 0.0925447433944 295% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177532810234 0.071462118173 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.369525884318 0.151781067708 243% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200459708718 0.0609392437508 329% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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