Whether a nation should host international events like Olympic Games and World Cup?
Recently, hosting international events have sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "is it advantageous or not?". Whereas it is a widely held view that nations are highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the social standpoint, nations are bound up inextricably with national events, which indicates they lead to both the Olympic Games and x. As a well –known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 demonstrates the relationship between hosting countries and World Cup as well as an exponential increase in the game's records. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of international records is correlated positively with not only national nations but also international events.
Within the realm of general science, without the slightest doubt, international events attribute to national nations, in that it would come down to national games, hosting countries, and worldwide games. A salient example of such attribution is the World Cup, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take Olympic games for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint transportation problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of hosting international events.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the advantages of hosting international events are of more significance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...ying goes 'alls well that ends well,' after analyzing what elaborated above,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65447154472 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22927248872 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650406504065 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6059413083 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.1 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345630865941 0.242375264174 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116383117744 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538806378954 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18585419139 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078134383452 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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