Nowadays many people prefer to shop in supermarket rather than small shops or local markets? Is this positive or negative for development? Discuss and give your opinion.
Owing to innovations in retail sector, shopping is gaining popularity by leaps and bounds. A lion’s share of society always choose shopping in big malls rather than local market. This essay will cast light on both views before making a final note.
To begin with, there are ample benefits to students when they should prefer group studies. The predominant benefit is solving problems. To be more precise, if students are in trouble regarding any subjects or work hen they can easily get lots of solutions related to their problems during combined studies. Improving knowledge is another benefit for children. It means, in group studies, every student shares their personal opinion in a team and they can gain the right decision about their views when they have a wrong decision about any topic and also they are listening to creative ideas by other students. For instance, one of my friends who always prefer groups studies because he listens to everyone and improve their knowledge regarding academic subjects, so it is an aid in his final exams.
On the contrary, in spite of having some merits of group studies, it has some advantages also when students study alone. Initially, concentration is playing a vital role in study which is come only in studies alone. What is more, during study time, if students did not get full focus on their study then they cannot remember all topics about academic subjects. In addition, not only they make their own plan but also reading time is always considered in the study because some students choose to study at midnight while others in the morning. Hence, they can make their own plan according to their situation.
To recapitulate, although buying from local markets which provides good discounts and so on, supermarkets or shopping mall gives a pleasant experience to customers. That is why I firmly believe that this trend is indeed positive for the present as well as the future of the retail market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to shop'.
Suggestion: to shop
...n's share of society always choose shopping in big malls rather than local market....
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... share of society always choose shopping in big malls rather than local market. T...
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Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...oup studies, every student shares their personal opinion in a team and they can gain the right d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, regarding, so, then, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, in spite of, on the contrary, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04573170732 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47734379976 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600609756098 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5241712568 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128223735278 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477994607198 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654333611646 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114622681938 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959363005253 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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