TPO 42
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Working in a happy place is productive and every businessman tries to provide such an appropriate space for his employees. Although some people prefer to do multi kinds of duties on job but others adore to have similar responsibilities. I agree with different kinds of work that are defined according to individual's abilities both physically and mentally. I feel this way for 3 main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First, doing only one kind of work in working time is boring. Although people may feel content at first but by passing the time they will loose their intention for doing that kinds of duty. For example, 2 years ago when I was a manager in tableware factory some worker should decorate dishes with decal. They should prepare at least 1000 decorated dishes in a day. It was very awesome and many of them abandon their job after several mounts.
In addition, if employers know their personnel's talents, not only will they help to their promotion and productivity, but they also can gain more profit. To clarify, In my industrial experiences, I was witness that when my boss realized challenging spirit of one of workers in sorting line, he could exploit of that person in financial department. This decision changed that worker's life strikingly after 15 year and he find himself a prosperous person with a well level of salary.
Lastly, leaning new thing is amusing for humans. In addition, they can get terrific experiences in whole life. For instance, in above factory, when my friend initiated her work, she logged data in whole day. it was relatively easy job to sit on a chair and work with computer. upon she change her job and challenged with different persons in production line as an engineer, she learned more and more and her discipline changed. she was very introverted but became social person and become one of gifted managers in that company.
Overall, what drives somebody to conclude having different kinds of work in a day is more preferred in compare with rut in job can be fall into 3 main categories including avoiding from boring job, discovering special talents and earning precious knowledge and experiences. These factors help employees have a happy time at work and even in their personal life.
- tpo 28Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past. 76
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- TPO 29 83
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...first but by passing the time they will loose their intention for doing that kinds of...
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Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d prepare at least 1000 decorated dishes in a day. It was very awesome and many o...
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Line 9, column 376, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
... department. This decision changed that workers life strikingly after 15 year and he fi...
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Line 9, column 421, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...rs life strikingly after 15 year and he find himself a prosperous person with a well...
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Line 13, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le life. For instance, in above factory, when my friend initiated her work, she l...
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Line 13, column 210, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...her work, she logged data in whole day. it was relatively easy job to sit on a cha...
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Line 13, column 279, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Upon
... sit on a chair and work with computer. upon she change her job and challenged with ...
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Line 13, column 288, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'changes'.
Suggestion: changes
... chair and work with computer. upon she change her job and challenged with different p...
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Line 13, column 430, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...re and more and her discipline changed. she was very introverted but became social ...
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Line 17, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t work and even in their personal life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, may, so, well, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92447916667 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6652103262 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596354166667 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7796050584 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.55 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155456899952 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449667107546 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037693883837 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859263378228 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257798588137 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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