Because of your job, you have to move to a new city. Write a letter to someone you know who lives there. In your letter
ask them to help you find somewhere to live
tell them the kind of accommodation you want to find
tell them which area of the city you want to live in
Dear Vishal,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to ask for your help I need to settle down in Toronto next month. Actually, I recently accepted a job offer from one of the multinational establishments in your city, named the SunLife Financials. It's really hard to find a rented accommodation in a cosmopolitan city like Toronto. But, it would be more easy and quick to find a place to live if you could guide me to search for a place to live near your residence.
I am not looking for a mansion rather I would prefer a spacious house with all the basic amenities, such as water supply, electricity supply, and well connected transportation. As I have lived in India with local society, I will be happy to have similar kind of society there too. Additionally, I would like to have loft in the house with staircase.
I am mainly interested in a high-rise apartment with a working lift and proper security. Also, I would prefer to live in the inner-city area where we could find some urban lifestyle. I know that most of the times, there is a huge traffic congestion, but I am not much worried about it. I would also prefer to live in a skyscraper with modern infrastructure with some cultural events.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Best wishes,
Matt Henry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 317, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lofted'.
Suggestion: lofted
...too. Additionally, I would like to have loft in the house with staircase. I am ...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ructure with some cultural events. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, really, so, well, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6313559322 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82166486109 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60593220339 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2007582512 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0714285714 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195433575814 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636928647571 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581004571099 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116856390979 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084020265816 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.