Playing computer game is a waste of time for children. Do you agree?
children’s gaming time has been a debatable issue. people are arguing that playing computer game is a waste of time for children. Personally, I strongly disagree with this statement.
On one hand, what I put my priority in is skill development. it is well known that, needless to say, playing computer game creates chances for children to face with whole new challenges they have never seen before. Therefore, they have to dive into the problems to seek for the answer. As a result, they are supposed to consider every option to choose the optimal one. consequently, gaming plays a crucial role in developing children’s problem solving skill. More interestingly, it can’t be denied that, by playing game, children are likelihood to talk with people from all around the world. As a consequence, they stand a golden chance to communicate with the people that are really different in many aspects with them. On that ground, they have to figure out the way to discuss and cooperate with the others to complete the game’s missions. this leads to the fact that communication skill is certain to be ameliorated. By and large, children’s skills are likely to be upgraded when they know how to play game.
On the other hand, some people might say that when children spend time to play game, they would have no time to do homework or review the lesson. Accordingly, time would be wasted and badly affect the study result. However, that is not necessarily the case. In fact, it is apparent that when children play games, their playing time is controlled by the game system that will warn them or at least, their parents will control it. As a result, they will not spend time wastefully, while still have time for lesson and homework. Furthermore, they have the chance to both relax and learn things that they can not learn at school them at the same time. consequently, their study motivation will surely increase. Thus, results in an efficient studying schedule. Beyond any doubt, the idea that playing games will affect study efficiency is often possible to end in collapse.
All the factors mentioned above are evidences supporting my disagreement. it is highly recommended that people should take my writing into great consideration to make appropriate decisions on children’s gaming time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, furthermore, however, if, really, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, at least, in fact, as a result, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07291666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83941118181 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5546875 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8275825073 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351589585666 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104950706286 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129797922585 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246887196146 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12422159222 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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