You are due to start a new job next week but you will not able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:
-Explain your situation
-Describe your problems
-Tell him/her when you think you can start
Hi John,
I writng this letter in order to inform you that I will not be able to start my work on 9/7/2019 as per my initial commitment. Kindly request you to consider my apology based on the following justification and agree up on the commencement.
I feel sick last week and I was admitted to hospital due to viral fewer. This took me 5 days to recover and as per my current employer's policy I will have to serve my complete 2 weeks of notice without any excuse. Hence, my absence during the sick period has be compensated by working next week on final handover, knowledge transfer and to bring all my activities to closure before I leave.
I am really glad and excited about the opportunity with your company. However, based on the above circumstances, I request you to postpone my start date to 15/07/2019. This will help me to complete my pending activities.
Thanks for your consideration.
Best Regards
Ragav
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
..., my absence during the sick period has be compensated by working next week on fin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, really, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77300613497 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83217720961 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662576687117 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3161463695 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193213062008 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736822910983 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054365437089 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130544043869 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495046155346 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.