Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is
to move in the opposite direction---in other words, to make things as simple as possible.
The assertion states that a person can easily make things bigger and more complex, while he/she needs real efforts and courage to make things as simple as possible. That assertion is right on the money from my point of view as I also think that I can make things complex in no time, but require much effort and courage to make that same thing simpler.
In the daily life, people deal with various sorts of thing among which some are complex and some simple. A person who leads a typical life, gets inured to that daily tasks he performs, and it is known that if anyone wants to give in his/her any particular habit that needs effort. A typical jobholder who is so stuck with his/her job that he rarely can avoid all that job related stuffs even in a holiday. It is seemingly intricate for that person to get rid of that things, and if he wants to ignore those things, he requires courage and effort to stay away from his/her long fostered habits.
People are belligerent by nature, and wars around us are the proofs of that inherent cruelty. Every nation is admittedly enhancing their warfare to get protected from any kind of threats from other nations. For an instance, South Korea can be called into account. There Kim, the supreme leader is examining new missiles every now and then. He is easily doing that making the world’s environment complex with the threat of war. Conversely, great efforts need to stop this criteria and US has already tried for that to make a deal with South Korea, but those only have gone in vain. On the other hand, There are names that come into mind - Benjamin Franklin and George Washington. It was the time when British were colonizing in America though people of that time wanted to be free. This sort of thing made Franklin and Washington to come in front with courage and real effort to lead those people to freedom.
Finally, think about the daily technological products, that are being used all through the day. Those products are making are daily life easier and simpler that before, but their making process are not simplex at all. Those products are results of complex process and arduous efforts. A group of researchers, entrepreneurs, scientists and so other work industriously to present society products that have changed the lifestyle into easier ways.
In conclusion, a person can easily light a fire but it needs courage and effort to go in front of that fire to blow it off.
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- Unfortunately, the media tend to highlight what is sensational at the moment. Society wouldbe better served if the media reported or focused more fully on events and trends that willultimately have the most long-term significance. 62
- Imprisonment for violent crimes should be made as unpleasant as possible in order to deter potential offenders from committing such crimes. - GRE Issue 114 50
- Unfortunately, the media tend to highlight what is sensational at the moment. Society wouldbe better served if the media reported or focused more fully on events and trends that willultimately have the most long-term significance. 58
- Most important discoveries or creations are accidental: it is usually while seeking the answerto one question that we come across the answer to another. 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 9, column 321, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...upreme leader is examining new missiles every now and then. He is easily doing that making the wor...
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Line 9, column 472, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... Conversely, great efforts need to stop this criteria and US has already tried for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, if, so, then, while, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 429.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72027972028 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3398816147 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519813519814 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0242028187 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.45 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309807426515 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846784900862 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120080463267 0.0758088955206 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178376528913 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168037923843 0.0667264976115 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.