Some people believe that it is helpful to view a challenging situation as an opportunity for
personal growth. Others believe that reimagining challenging situations this way occupies
too much of the focus one needs to face challenges effectively.
The topic presented is complex and controversial. Man constantly strives to better himself, whenever man recieves an opportunity, he tries to wax his potential in order to meet the desired targets. Thus, any challenging situation provides man with an opportunity in order to better himself. However, some people argue that reimagining challenging situations this way occupies too much of the focus one needs to face challenges effectively. Both the persceptives on the issue are valid, but overall, the advantages of viewing challenges as an opportunity of personal growth simply outweighs its disadvantages.
First of all, let us look at some of the greatest feats achieved by man, they have all been inspired by challenges. Let us consider the example of Wilma Rudolf, being paralytic was advised by the doctors that she might never be able to walk again. Inspite of the revelation that she might not be able to walk again, she did not get bogged down. Wilma Rudolf viewing her challenging situation as an opportunity of personal growth and rising against all odds persevered and later went on to win Olympic medals for her country.
Secondly, the success of man in space interventions can all be attributed to men and women who constantly strived hard in order to overcome these challenges. The story of Neil Armstrong's journey from the Earth to the Moon is exemplary. It reiterates the importance of challenges in one's life. Being restrained by gravity, man viewed this as a challenge and ensured he created powerful rockets in order to escape the gravitational pull of the Earth. Subequently, man mastered the art of making rockets to reach the Moon. This challenge paved way to an abundance of opportunities in the field of space research.
On the contrary, some people argue that reimagining challenging situations as opportunities of personal growth occupies too much of the focus one needs to face challenges effectively. However, this objection can be countered by, reiteraing the importance of challenges in man's life. It is commonly, if you're the smartest person in the room, then you're in the wrong room. Challenge enables man to better himself in order to compete with the every competent world and stay relevant to meet the current requirements.
While the issue of whether a challenging situation should be viewed as an opportunity for personal growth must be considered carefully. The overall advantages in challenges to propel man to work on his abilities provided ample support that an opportunity must be viewed as an opportunity of personal growth.
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Message: Did you mean 'propelling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18138424821 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00339765411 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510739856802 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6302948756 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.380952381 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9523809524 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400738129516 0.243740707755 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134913886381 0.0831039109588 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160428958336 0.0758088955206 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250757486725 0.150359130593 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113093453349 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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