WELL BEING OF A SOCIETY IS ENHANCED WHEN MANY OF ITS PEOPLE QUESTION AUTHORITY
The given topic raises the issue whether the wellbeing of a society can be enhanced when many of its people question authority. Indisputably, the involvement of masses can prove to make the system robust and fault proof, nevertheless it can also prove to be detrimental to the wellbeing and stability of the society. Thus I generally disagree with the opinion that peoples involvememt in the administration of a society can contribute towards the wefare of a society and would agree that it does more bad than good for the proper functioning of society.
The society is comprised of people with different backgrounds, viewpoints, interests, goals and opinions. When a set of rules are enforced for a society by a body in authority, they are defined keeping in mind the diversity of the people of the society as a key factor. It may occur that some factions of the society may differ in opinion with the authority. If these factions straightout question the authority and criticise their descision without understanding the underlying intention it can lead to a pandemonium without being able to arrive at a conclusion or consensus. This is can be attributed as a major reason for the disharmony within social groups. As the saying goes, "Too many cooks spoil the broth". Likewise too many people debating over a common topic can make it difficult to make a descision.
One may argue that it is only through scrutiny and thorough criticism that fault-proof, robust and efficient systems are made. And that since different people have different views about a topic, it provides a broader view of the horizon. Even so, I would still argue that this opposite view does little good. Infact too many viewpoints at times tend to obscure the mind. It also leads to chaos and confusion.
As a solution to the given predicament, so as to involve the hoi-polloi in matters of administration and give them an equal say in matters pertaining to the society, I would suggest the appointment of representatives, who can seamlessly convey the grievances and suggestions of the people of the society. This would allow the involvemememt of the masses and allow them to express their viewpoints and opinions. Aditionally, setting up suggestion boxes or online forums for discussion of matters pertinent to the society will also prove to be useful.
In conclusion to the given predicament I would suggest that while 'direct' involvement of the people of a society in voicing their opinions can prove to be detrimental to the wellbeing of a society and lead to confusion, it is advisable to appoint representatives for different factions or groups of the society for conveying the opinion of the masses. Also, the introduction of suggestion boxes and online forums can prove to aid the purpose.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
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Suggestion: Likewise,
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, may, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, while, as to, even so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2339.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 463.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05183585313 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01758703826 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464362850972 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 736.2 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.7959776227 60.3974514979 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.95 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.15 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277990414078 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798928742905 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102962871163 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150818500934 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976795952173 0.0667264976115 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.